50 Words and phrases that call attention to your benefits, strengths, and discriminators
Calling out your benefits, Strengths, and discriminators helps the customer recognize them and can help raise your proposal score. You can call out benefits, Strengths, and discriminators using icons, graphics, tables, words, and phrases.
Consider using any of the following 50 words or phrases to call attention to the benefits, Strengths, and discriminators in your proposal.
Words
- Advantage
- Benefit
- Differentiator
- Discriminator
- Eclipse
- Exceed (requirements, service levels, acceptable quality levels)
- Excel
- Exclusive
- Go beyond
- Greater than
- High (confidence, marks, recruitment, retention, value)
- Low (risk, cost)
- Master
- More than
- Only
- Outclass (outdo, outshine, outstrip, outweigh)
- Over
- Pass
- Significant
- Singular
- Strength
- Surpass
- Top
- Transcend
- Unique
Phrases
Before using one of these phrases, connect it to a user requirement, quantify or qualify the phrase, and follow it with a proof point from your experience.
- A benefit of our approach is [fill in the blank]
- A differentiator of our approach is [fill in the blank]
- A discriminator of our approach is [fill in the blank]
- A key takeaway from our presentation is [fill in the blank]
- A strength of our solution is [fill in the blank]
- An important idea is [fill in the blank]
- An advantage you receive from our approach is [fill in the blank]
- Customer’s gain [fill in the blank]
- Our approach significantly improves mission outcomes because [fill in the blank]
- Our approach significantly reduces the risk of contract performance because [fill in the blank]
- Our outcomes top (or transcend) those of our nearest competitors because [fill in the blank]
- Our solution benefits operations because [fill in the blank]
- Our solution exceeds requirements because [fill in the blank]
- Our solution minimizes technical risk because [fill in the blank]
- Our solution offers best value because [fill in the blank]
- Our solution surpasses the requirements because [fill in the blank}
- Our team has signed exclusive subcontract agreements with us to [fill in the blank
- Our performance metrics are greater than [fill in the blank]
- The expertise of our staff exceeds requirements because [fill in the blank]
- You can have high confidence in our solution because [fill in the blank]
- We are singularly (or uniquely) qualified to perform the work because [fill in the blank]
- We have over [fill in the blank]
- We have mastered [fill in the blank]
- We offer exclusive access to [fill in the blank]
- We are the only company that can [fill in the blank]
By Brenda Crist, Vice President at Lohfeld Consulting Group, MPA, CPP APMP Fellow
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